"This rhyming scheme is beautiful. The line "For in their dance, we find a truth so rare, That love and lust, when interwoven, share." really stood out to me. This poem tackled a very relevant issue in modern society. Where do the lines blur between love and lust? Or are they intertwined into the same notion? Enough of my thoughts just wanted to praise your beautiful work! "
Jan 23, 2025
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My Raw Beauty commented:
"This rhyming scheme is beautiful. The line "For in their dance, we find a truth so rare, That love and lust, when interwoven, share." really stood out to me. This poem tackled a very relevant issue in modern society. Where do the lines blur between love and lust? Or are they intertwined into the same notion? Enough of my thoughts just wanted to praise your beautiful work! "