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I've been writing a story for some time, and I would like some honest feedback on it. The things I want feedback on are the following: Pacing, Engagement, How well I am representing certain ethnic groups, neurodivergent people, and other such characters, and general realism. You can also pay for bonus content :))...
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Chapter 2 - The Trip To The Land Of The Sun

Mar 08, 2026
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Having found an apprentice candidate, Olorin visits his home and discovers something shocking about the candidate's dad...
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Metalloid Story Chapter 1

Feb 26, 2026
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Disgusted by the state of the world, the main character, Olorin Adegoke, looks for an apprentice and finds it in an unlikely source.
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Metalloid Story Prologue

Feb 26, 2026
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The prologue to the story I'm writing. Pretty basic, nothing notable. It's basically meant to explain a little bit of the main character's backstory, as well as explain where their powers came from.